Torrents of tears stream through the sound of our voices
Heads hang low, weighed down by grief
Stiff posture crumbles as you melt into my arms
Words are deemed meaningless as none can be used
Burdens besiege weary hearts, demolishing resistance
Fragile embrace revitalizes minds, combining our strengths
Endless encouragements silently exchanged, trust delving deep
Bodies release this position, able to stand again
While still remaining connected, hands firmly clasped
Even in the time of weakness there is strength found. Whether it be in the loss of a loved one, a lover even the loss of self. Having someone to lean on and a shoulder to cry on is important. Loved this one very much. I have a poem titled Tear Drops, stop by and take a look.
the simple tip about writing poem is to write ur thoughts on a paper and then just give it a rhymyl look but sometimes poems r written in such an amazing way that they really don't need to be rhythmic. Nice poems.. share more.............
I can follow your line of thinking. But I am not helped with so many rather hard words. Could you possibly be a little more simple? No hurt intended. But I like the poem. Mohabeer Beeharry I am sorry
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Tiffany. You right beautifully and your serious vocabulary creates a semi-surreal and dense meaning. Lovely poem and thank you for it. I love Massachusetts. I was there some years ago, studying Engineering. You may read my poems and comment on a few, maybe. I added you to my list of friends. G.