Dreamer Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

Dreamer

Rating: 4.8


I had such a dream last night,
I was floating above the trees,
And my lips were touching,
Were they my lips she asked.

Parked beside the ocean,
Watching the stars penetrate the tide,
Thy eyes to mine, time had stunned,
'Touch me' thy eyes sighed.

My hands rested on thy breast,
My body rested above thy,
Softly n clearly I could hear the cry,
Of pleasure made under the watch of the heavenly sky.

We started to sink into the night beach sand,
And away from the moon spotlight we ran,
Falling into the ditch of pleasure land,
The cry got louder and silence was now banned.

Although the best part I miss to see,
Woken up to a morning with a lusting fee,
Now I ask a question to me,
Was it thee fair one? I have missed to see.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 08 February 2011

You're a real dreamer and this is a good write.Mari.

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Khaldun Atum 24 November 2010

One word: Vivid. Excellently written.

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Kelsey Korosko 24 November 2010

I like that you made this piece all your own..uniquely personal and sweet all in one.: D

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David Rain 22 November 2010

This is a good love poem. It's not some rhyming little piece of lovey dovey trash, it's unique and it's personal. ^.^

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Robin Machorro 16 November 2010

wow that was really good! its been a long time since a read a poem that good keep up the good work :)

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