Age Of Loneliness Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

Age Of Loneliness

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The evening of loneliness,
When the wind whispers thou name,
I are forced to bow down to distress.

Every rose in the universe,
Seem black and dead,
Melancholy is every song verse.

A night without a word,
Almost killing me,
The feel of happiness’ like raindrops, Lowered.

The use of an evil potion,
Has ruined my night,
Ah rose I give thou my tear ocean.

Thou smile a splendid light in darkness,
Thou beauty none can match,
An apology i wish to confess,
My love for thy none can snatch.

Forgive me for all wrongs,
Love me for all the rights,
I ought to be thou slave,
As my love has reached new heights.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Merna Ibrahim 19 November 2010

What a sad and touching poem! Well done.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 21 November 2010

Nice concept of writing a poem that deals with loneliness. The language is simple but the expression is impressive. Every word of this poem touches our heart, because it is the language of heart.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 17 August 2013

so beautiful and touching the flow and the emotioan melt so well good written

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Rosalinda Martinez 17 February 2011

Very beautiful. Thanks for sharing

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Khaldun Atum 24 November 2010

Very captivating. Loved it.

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Ian Singer 24 November 2010

very well written. i loved how this poem expressed your view of loneliness.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 21 November 2010

Nice concept of writing a poem that deals with loneliness. The language is simple but the expression is impressive. Every word of this poem touches our heart, because it is the language of heart.

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