Either Way Poem by John Kipling Lewis

Either Way

Rating: 3.2


Crafted life that's removed from choice.

All choice and spontaneous explosions of
actions well removed from social norms.

In either case I can't remember the other way.

I forget what I can be and suffer or spring
ignorantly abandoned to my coming fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K Holoholo 05 November 2007

Don't get it, I need to see it and I don't. No vision to it.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

4. No details, just abstract telliness. Give me examples, images, anything to make it work as a poem.

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Donna Robertson 03 August 2007

Very very good. Life is like that.

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