Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 5,852 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Enchantment - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Enchantment steals my weary heart
When`er I see the golden dawn
Which so does set my soul aflame
That I should never be forlorn

To see the beauty in a smile
To feel such magic all around
Delights me with the sweetest joy
In every sight, in every sound

Enchantment plays upon the soul
To captivate, such charms convey
All heavens wonders that we see
Around us through each passing day

Enchantment be the stars that shine
Enchantment is the glowing moon
Enchantment in the twisting vine
Enchantment through the sun at noon

Enchantment be the rambling brook
Enchantment is the rolling sea
Enchantment in the eyes that look
Enchantment through the eyes that see


Comments about Enchantment by Valerie Dohren

  • Hazel Durham (10/10/2012 9:55:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem about the great wonders of nature. Brilliant write! (Report) Reply

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  • Dee Corpolongo (9/12/2012 11:06:00 AM)


    This is excellent, and all the most beautiful and amazing wonders of Nature that are there for everyone
    to enjoy are mentioned here and truly felt. A beautiful and 'enchanting' reminder to take time to enjoy it all.
    A perfect word to describe it all...Enchanting.(such a beautiful word in itself!) Thank you for sharing, Val.
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  • (9/4/2012 5:48:00 PM)


    Super enchanting verse, vigorously written.
    Loved every line.
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  • (9/2/2012 5:21:00 PM)


    The power of Nature and her inherent beauty is enough to enchant any fine poet. (Report) Reply

  • (9/2/2012 4:18:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem, sometimes we can forget the beauty around us, your poem shows us
    it's still there.
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  • Valsa George (9/2/2012 12:04:00 PM)


    With the Muse residing within you, everything is enchantment, I suppose! ! (Report) Reply

  • (9/1/2012 1:17:00 PM)


    A perfectly enchanting blend of enchantment in this enchanting poem. You scored again with
    another 10
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  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (8/31/2012 11:02:00 AM)


    what an enchanting poem
    More pure perfection, tell your muse good job
    and pat her on her head for me.
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  • Diane Hine (8/31/2012 9:52:00 AM)


    A truly joyful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (8/31/2012 9:51:00 AM)


    You said it Val, Enchantment, this really is an enchanting poem, lovely. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 31, 2012



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