Erratic Life Poem by Valsa George

With trials and sorrows at times. Nice work.

We should stoically face life's challenges and trials And cherish, at any chance the short intervals of joy Life is beautiful in-spite of all the hurdles, Bearing it with a big broad smile and never giving in to the hardships. Beautifully written showing all the shades of life. My compliments for this thought provoking poem.10 seems less for this poem.

I am a stoic. Your poem was just how I see things. Such an intelligent and insightful piece of writing done very eloquently. A 10+

The short interval of joy that comes after a long painful period is more pleasant than any other thing we see, we feel and we react in our life. Valsa is a great hunter of beauty and capable of capturing the beautiful eyed deer alive without giving them a wound.

Life, s philosophy expressed in so beautiful words- - Trials and sorrows predominate in life And joy is only a passing phase We are dragged down even by little things And he trivial sometimes assume demoniac dimensions.

.....stoically face life's challenges......brilliant.....

Life is often a tight rope work... appreciated this thoughtful expression. Top score and to my favourite! !

A BRILLIANT MODERN POEM... It seems my lap top almost automatically decided on the caps... Just one thing, if 'joy is a passing phase', so are sorrows. Man's essential nature is bliss, which is there if he's in touch with his true self. Yes, one need be a stoic, sthita-prajna, as B.Geeta said.

Trials and sorrows predominate in life And joy is only a passing phase We are dragged down even by little things And the trivial sometimes assumes demoniac dimensions.....so true. You have made an insightful inscription on life incisively. Truth inside life is well executed. A brilliant poem is amazingly shared.10

A balanced view of life presented with a wise choice of words. Again an enriching piece from your mighty pen. A reflection of your deep insight. Full marks to you.