Excuse Me I Am Blind Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Excuse Me I Am Blind

Rating: 5.0


On the doors of my heart,
I wrote sweetheart,
Trespassers will be prosecuted,
But the order was rejected,
I was just a juvenile,
With a sweet smile,
A whisper I rewind,
Excuse me I am blind.

(Being inspired by Durgesh Prajapati's post at Facebook)

Saturday, December 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love is blind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 09 December 2014

nicely crafted poem....like it

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Neela Nath Das 07 December 2014

It is a melodious song rather.87883

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 December 2014

Oh this is very sweet penned brilliantly........thanks for sharing....10/10

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 December 2014

An amazing Short Poem, loved it.........10

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Valsa George 06 December 2014

So she trespassed into your heart against all prohibitions and you generously forgave her! Yes, laws are quite flexible! Really enjoyed!

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