Amitava Sur

Bronze Star - 5,755 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Five Liners.1. Mystery

Five liners.1. Mystery

What a mystery in this world, we all do see!
If somewhere it is dawn
Then somewhere it is dusk! ! .

What a mystery with the people, we all do see!
Most of the people, we live behind a musk ! ! !
Amitava (2.8.2014) 6-00 pm


Submitted: Saturday, August 02, 2014

Topic of this poem: mystery

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,579 Points Savita Tyagi (8/7/2014 4:28:00 PM)

    Nice five liner. World is a mystery. And human beings are more mysterious than any body. Both your five liners are great. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,319 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    Thoughtful Mystery, you have presented it very well. Not letting the world knowing, how one live. Very true said, we can never guess how others live...It's all how they present themselves so beautifully, make us feel their life is so beautiful. In fact every thing remains hidden...Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,598 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/3/2014 3:37:00 PM)

    Very good, Amitava, the world does have many mysteries, and we humans more even, hiding, not wanting ourselves to be known for who we are. So many things need to be explored, met and brought out into the open. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,644 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/3/2014 2:13:00 AM)

    Nice four lines. The mystery will remain a mystery. These questions have no answers. (Report) Reply

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