Rekha Mandagere


Focus On Your Goal - Poem by Rekha Mandagere

My lovely little spirit of smiling Denmark
This is right time for making great remark
Spread Light everywhere by driving away the dark
Here is the way to win the race with highest mark!

Colourful aims spread around you like vivid choices
Of course you would select one without much noise
Realize all your dreams by listening to great voices
Deep in your heart enjoy the sentiment of rejoice


Gaining knowledge is surely for one's enlightenment
Be confident while choosing it for your heart's enjoyment
I wait patiently opening my eyes widely in astonishment
Your goal should always be focused on its accomplishment!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

One should have clearcut aim and love for knowledge to achieve success in life.

Comments about Focus On Your Goal by Rekha Mandagere

  • Bronze Star - 2,755 Points Bernard Snyder (1/2/2012 11:10:00 PM)

    This one deserves a 10++++++. Great write! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 778 Points Aranthabailu Ummar (9/16/2011 8:21:00 AM)

    a good treat to young ones (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philip Jose (6/25/2011 11:41:00 PM)

    REALLY ENCOURAGING, I WISH I COULD WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS WITH MUSICAL QUALITY (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,808 Points Ray Subrata Ray (3/22/2011 8:38:00 AM)

    This poem of yours well depicts the qualities of love and manifold soothing of love. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,467 Points Unwritten Soul (3/20/2011 3:06:00 AM)

    Touched by beautiful advices from mother to child...n child here refer to me may refer to other readers also, in a word of strength this is what we need to hold to serve a word of encouragement...''''''''FOCUS''''''''..and also ''''''''GOAL''''''''...thanks for this advice it so gently spoken in soft poetic way :) :) -Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Martin Lochner (3/18/2011 5:34:00 PM)

    it rings true and i like the music and light contained in this piece well done and thank you for reading my work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 209 Points Deepak Calyampoondi (3/15/2011 8:41:00 PM)

    Lines of wisdom, well expressed.fantastic imagination (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (3/15/2011 1:29:00 AM)

    You have a new comment about your poem: FOCUS ON YOUR GOAL

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    Sailng the journey with passion, acquiring knowledge and with love keeping the goal in sight. It is not the destination that matters but the enjoyment of journey that makes it more meaningful. Nice description of theme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Santosh Sharma (3/14/2011 3:55:00 AM)

    Sailng the journey with passion, acquiring knowledge and with love keeping the goal in sight. It is not the destination that matters but the enjoyment of journey that makes it more meaningful. Nice description of theme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (3/9/2011 11:21:00 PM)

    you reference is educative.nice to read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Cristina Teodor (3/9/2011 12:32:00 AM)

    Rhyme is perfect, you describe so well the 'colourful aims' that each of us we have and how we realize all our dreams 'by listening to great voices'. The resolution of poem is revelating 'your goal should always be focus on its accomplisment'. A real lesson of enlightment. Well done..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Abhay Vignesh L (3/9/2011 12:10:00 AM)

    Rhyme mingled with verse....Thats what I will call poetry with a purpose...full marks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenny Gordon (3/8/2011 9:35:00 PM)

    Fascinating, a beautifully expressed tribute to the process of composition, or perhaps rather the success in composing. Lovely reflection of the opportunity, as well as sweetly hinting not so subtly at the generous goal of spreading cheer, the joy in composition on the part of the poetess, discovering what issues forth. Very beautiful and delightfully depicted. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (3/8/2011 12:08:00 PM)

    Very beautiful lines having great wisdom and depth. The poem is extremely didactic teaching moral at different levels.
    A contemplative and poignant write. Thanks for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Dave Dafes (3/8/2011 5:24:00 AM)

    a life without a goal is wasted on endless pursuit... We should focus on our goals and make each day count..Beautiful poem..Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Knight (3/8/2011 3:42:00 AM)

    Our GOALS - REKHA - Should always be focussed on knowledge and enlightenment. We should always seek for TRUTH because TRUTH will make us free. Thanks for sharing - Your Friend - JOHN : o) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,755 Points Bernard Snyder (3/7/2011 11:30:00 AM)

    Very nice message shared rekha! As always, I'm fascinated. Keep it up and thanks again for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenny Gordon (3/6/2011 11:50:00 PM)

    Fascinating, a beautifully expressed tribute to the process of composition, or perhaps rather the success in composing. Lovely reflection of the opportunity, as well as sweetly hinting not so subtly at the generous goal of spreading cheer, the joy in composition on the part of the poetess, discovering what issues forth. Very beautiful and delightfully depicted. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wendy Thopliss (3/6/2011 5:47:00 PM)

    This has been very well thought out , Good poem Rekha enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (3/6/2011 6:32:00 AM)

    interesting theme/well set (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 4, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 30, 2014


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