Treasure Island

Rekha Mandagere


FOCUS ON YOUR GOAL


My lovely little spirit of smiling Denmark
This is right time for making great remark
Spread Light everywhere by driving away the dark
Here is the way to win the race with highest mark!


Colourful aims spread around you like vivid choices
Of course you would select one without much noise
Realize all your dreams by listening to great voices
Deep in your heart enjoy the sentiment of rejoice


Gaining knowledge is surely for one's enlightenment
Be confident while choosing it for your heart's enjoyment
I wait patiently opening my eyes widely in astonishment
Your goal should always be focused on its accomplishment!

Submitted: Friday, March 04, 2011
Edited: Thursday, August 07, 2014

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  • Philip Jose (6/25/2011 11:41:00 PM)

    REALLY ENCOURAGING, I WISH I COULD WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS WITH MUSICAL QUALITY (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (3/20/2011 3:06:00 AM)

    Touched by beautiful advices from mother to child...n child here refer to me may refer to other readers also, in a word of strength this is what we need to hold to serve a word of encouragement...''''''''FOCUS''''''''..and also ''''''''GOAL''''''''...thanks for this advice it so gently spoken in soft poetic way :) :) -Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Martin Lochner (3/18/2011 5:34:00 PM)

    it rings true and i like the music and light contained in this piece well done and thank you for reading my work (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (3/15/2011 1:29:00 AM)

    You have a new comment about your poem: FOCUS ON YOUR GOAL

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    Sailng the journey with passion, acquiring knowledge and with love keeping the goal in sight. It is not the destination that matters but the enjoyment of journey that makes it more meaningful. Nice description of theme (Report) Reply

  • Santosh Sharma (3/14/2011 3:55:00 AM)

    Sailng the journey with passion, acquiring knowledge and with love keeping the goal in sight. It is not the destination that matters but the enjoyment of journey that makes it more meaningful. Nice description of theme (Report) Reply

  • Cristina Teodor (3/9/2011 12:32:00 AM)

    Rhyme is perfect, you describe so well the 'colourful aims' that each of us we have and how we realize all our dreams 'by listening to great voices'. The resolution of poem is revelating 'your goal should always be focus on its accomplisment'. A real lesson of enlightment. Well done..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

  • Jenny Gordon (3/8/2011 9:35:00 PM)

    Fascinating, a beautifully expressed tribute to the process of composition, or perhaps rather the success in composing. Lovely reflection of the opportunity, as well as sweetly hinting not so subtly at the generous goal of spreading cheer, the joy in composition on the part of the poetess, discovering what issues forth. Very beautiful and delightfully depicted. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (3/8/2011 12:08:00 PM)

    Very beautiful lines having great wisdom and depth. The poem is extremely didactic teaching moral at different levels.
    A contemplative and poignant write. Thanks for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Dave Dafes (3/8/2011 5:24:00 AM)

    a life without a goal is wasted on endless pursuit... We should focus on our goals and make each day count..Beautiful poem..Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (3/8/2011 3:42:00 AM)

    Our GOALS - REKHA - Should always be focussed on knowledge and enlightenment. We should always seek for TRUTH because TRUTH will make us free. Thanks for sharing - Your Friend - JOHN : o) (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (3/7/2011 11:30:00 AM)

    Very nice message shared rekha! As always, I'm fascinated. Keep it up and thanks again for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Jenny Gordon (3/6/2011 11:50:00 PM)

    Fascinating, a beautifully expressed tribute to the process of composition, or perhaps rather the success in composing. Lovely reflection of the opportunity, as well as sweetly hinting not so subtly at the generous goal of spreading cheer, the joy in composition on the part of the poetess, discovering what issues forth. Very beautiful and delightfully depicted. (Report) Reply

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