My lovely little spirit of smiling Denmark
This is right time for making great remark
Spread Light everywhere by driving away the dark
Here is the way to win the race with highest mark!
Colourful aims spread around you like vivid choices
Of course you would select one without much noise
Realize all your dreams by listening to great voices
Deep in your heart enjoy the sentiment of rejoice
Gaining knowledge is surely for one's enlightenment
Be confident while choosing it for your heart's enjoyment
I wait patiently opening my eyes widely in astonishment
Your goal should always be focused on its accomplishment!
a life without a goal is wasted on endless pursuit... We should focus on our goals and make each day count..Beautiful poem..Thanks for sharing
Very beautiful lines having great wisdom and depth. The poem is extremely didactic teaching moral at different levels. A contemplative and poignant write. Thanks for sharing...
Fascinating, a beautifully expressed tribute to the process of composition, or perhaps rather the success in composing. Lovely reflection of the opportunity, as well as sweetly hinting not so subtly at the generous goal of spreading cheer, the joy in composition on the part of the poetess, discovering what issues forth. Very beautiful and delightfully depicted.
Rhyme mingled with verse....Thats what I will call poetry with a purpose...full marks
REALLY ENCOURAGING, I WISH I COULD WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS WITH MUSICAL QUALITY
This poem of yours well depicts the qualities of love and manifold soothing of love.
Touched by beautiful advices from mother to child...n child here refer to me may refer to other readers also, in a word of strength this is what we need to hold to serve a word of encouragement...''''''''FOCUS''''''''..and also ''''''''GOAL''''''''...thanks for this advice it so gently spoken in soft poetic way :) :) -Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Our GOALS - REKHA - Should always be focussed on knowledge and enlightenment. We should always seek for TRUTH because TRUTH will make us free. Thanks for sharing - Your Friend - JOHN : o)