Eyan Desir

Rookie - 15 Points (caribbean)

.. Font Color= Blue Fake Comments - Poem by Eyan Desir

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Painting beautiful words
On an ugly portrait
Does not make the dust
Under a carpet disappear

Giving a frog fresh roses
Will make him elated
Spill the truth and break his heart

It's a good cause of pain
That removes wax in an eye

Correcting your seeds
Means it will blossom
Into a brilliant plant
Giving fake comments...

Makes! terrible poets.


Comments about .. Font Color= Blue Fake Comments by Eyan Desir

  • Rookie - 5 Points Janell Cressman (12/18/2009 2:48:00 PM)

    it's about time someone said something about that subject, really good poem, i totally agree with Kranthi, what he said said is soo true,

    thanks for sharing, it was a pleasure to read! ! ! ! (10) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sharnae Green (12/17/2009 6:04:00 PM)

    the realist ive read yet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ray Telcy (11/26/2009 4:08:00 PM)

    my fav, i really like this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nikunj Sharma (11/19/2009 5:39:00 PM)

    Couldn't agree more...its a great poem.....keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Kranthi Pothineni (11/19/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    Once I had read and recorded it in my handbook...'I can't judge any of you. I have no malice against you and no ribbons for you. But I think that it is high time that you all start looking at yourselves, and judging the lie that you live in.' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points cheyenne briggs (11/17/2009 7:42:00 PM)

    wow...that is so true..i likes it...i thought it was funny..thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nic Leisure (11/17/2009 12:20:00 PM)

    it's true
    great job to this poem....keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (11/17/2009 11:21:00 AM)

    well, as a poem this is so nice
    as an idea..i don't like it...
    am not going to talk more, cuz we have talked abt this a lot through private aren`t we?
    so keep on writing..but not blaming..
    cuz i know you are the greatest poet not a...
    nice poem actually
    luwi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (11/16/2009 6:30:00 PM)

    Some are born critics and they don't know how to appreciate other's good work.
    They count holes rather than taking the good aspects in each work. A very good poem you have written here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (11/16/2009 6:14:00 AM)

    Yes, I totally agree with the last two verses....But i will tell you something, may be the people who say ' Oh this poem is great..' and they don't like it, perhaps they say so because they don't want to hurt the poet's feeling but they say it once -in only one poem, not in every poem-..when they say so on the all poems this is called HYPOCRISY! ! .......nice message...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (11/16/2009 5:11:00 AM)

    Painting beautiful words
    On an ugly portrait
    Does not make the dust
    Under a carpet disappear
    -----
    great metaphors used........fake comments have either ways of....... feeding the pride to inspire and continue to work hard or......... make false belief and the pride fed is as egocentric......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (11/14/2009 11:11:00 PM)

    ''Giving a frog fresh roses will make him elated.
    Spill the truth and break his heart...''

    The line reflects the poet's(your's) feelings.
    We can understand that you are deprived not
    only by this fake comments, but also these proxy ppls. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tiffany Channell (11/14/2009 7:16:00 PM)

    So true.
    keep it up
    God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ala Elouri (11/14/2009 4:17:00 PM)

    OMG! What ur saying is so true! :) Dude, ur great and keep that up. and ahmm, this is not a fake comment :) ! LOL :) : D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (: ~ Slade~ :) (11/14/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    That is truly deep. Honesty is the best policy. Being lied to can hurt worse than the truth on a matter. This is a great work. Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (11/14/2009 5:34:00 AM)

    What you say is true! Rather than giving fake comments, it is better not to give any comments! But everyone does not have a positive attitude like you! They
    react to criticism! Thanks for sharing your frank views! 10!
    -Raj (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~Heart of Ice~ ¢♦ ¢♦ ¢ (11/13/2009 6:08:00 PM)

    LOVE IT! ! ! how come all of ur poems rock? ? ? grr, not fair! ! ! ! ! lolz. really good poem and it pretty much states the truth. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Caitlyn Salters (11/13/2009 1:42:00 PM)

    this is freaking sweet.
    tehe fake comments mean that the person is not real enough to think of anything good to say
    hence the fakeness. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Nwagwu (11/13/2009 7:06:00 AM)

    fake comments make terible poets - indeed. Writing poems gives me joy and that's enough. You may comment as you wish - fake comments come from fake individuals. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Glaedr the poet (11/13/2009 12:23:00 AM)

    Very contrasting words, yet they come together to create their own new meaning. It makes me think and I like that. Well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 21, 2010