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For you my skies no longer stand dark,
Long into the hours of day
For you my heart has sung right from our start
And 'I love you' I long to say
With you my mind stands clear
Glimpsing no longer through the haze
As long as I can call you my dear
Love no longer seems a maze
With you my rapids slow to a calm
Love's no longer a flowing river
You fix my wounds with loving balm
It no longer stands, joyfully bitter
Confusion breaks, clearing the way
Making to form a brighter day
Timothy Weiermann
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Monday, October 06, 2008 |
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Wednesday, October 08, 2008 |
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Comments about this poem (For You
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immortal Butterfly (3/20/2009 2:14:00 PM)
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This Is Very Sweet And I Agree With Ershad Mazumder Love Is Undescribable.
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Ershad Mazumder (10/17/2008 10:04:00 PM)
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Very good expression of love in words.But love can not be described. You just feel it.
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Angel (Pepper lyons) (10/9/2008 3:30:00 PM)
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That was really good tim. I know you have most deffinetly scored with ur girl...
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/8/2008 6:20:00 PM)
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Hi Tim, its about time you tellin ya honey ' cry me a river....i'll be ur ocean'......
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Tyease Collins (10/7/2008 1:59:00 AM)
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Wow this is extremely beautiful. There was a smoothness to this poem that i liked. It just flowed so nicely. This is really nice. I really wish i could write poetry like you ^.^
Have a nice day
-Tyease C.
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Hazel Green Eyes (10/7/2008 12:03:00 AM)
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wow that poem was just beautiful, short and sweet. amazing write..~Love Hazel G.E
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Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/6/2008 8:20:00 PM)
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nice flow of ideas ..lines licid all through..and so is the words choice. well done
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Anong All (10/6/2008 1:27:00 PM)
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Ah, i enjoyed your poem, flows very nicely..
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