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Linda Winchell
(12/1/2008 5:53:00 PM) |
Now, correct me here Sir Timothy if I am wrong. But I read this as the end of life on earth and those who weep for it? Ten! ! ! Linda
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Greenwolfe 1962
(8/12/2008 10:02:00 PM) |
I read this slowly and carefully because I could tell from its structure that it was going to be hard to understand. It was. In fact, I couldn't, despite my best effort, make head nor tail of it. I'm sorry, but that means it gets a 6. I could
have given it a 5, but the writing was very sincere and I just couldn't do that.
GW62
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Paul Tousignant
(8/12/2008 10:06:00 AM) |
A powerful message and very good wording. Don't stop writing, you have a gift, so keep it up!
And so we go,
Paul
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Ophelia Payne
(8/11/2008 4:12:00 PM) |
Never, never stop word smithing wonderful poem thank you for shareing with us
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Anjali Sinha
(8/7/2008 11:22:00 AM) |
hey tim,
great poetry + 10
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