Daddy
I don't cry at night
for now I know
I will see you again
when it gets light
short and to the point. congratulations for the quit smoking. 10
it couldn't be shorter, Dave, and more potently said! this poem blew off my mind, drove home the message.
So bright, sounded like thunder I will see you again, when it gets light thank so nice of you
Pleased to hear your still off the dreaded weed Dave so well done. I only smoke when I have a drink so only at weekends, but I should knock it on the head as it's a nasty habit. Like your poem by the way!
thanks for poet note and for sharing the poem. i guess the two are related? some other comments feel they are.
Very good poem Dave, with an important message. Very well done! Keep it up.
Daughter's delight when dad stopped smoking. Let her delight continue. Beautiful poem to encourage others to stop. Thank you.
A wonderful poem.Thanks to your lovely daughter for encouraging you to stop this habit of smoking.I also hate smoking.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow, Wonderful poem...Lovely daughters words are so powerful that dad gave up smoking...Loved reading it. ++++10