Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,772 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Boy To A Man - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Father dear father
I must have loved you

But to hear you
Hurt my mother
Made me want
To hate you

I should have been able
To look up to you like all sons do
But all I wanted to do
Was hurt you

I'd lie in bed awake
And hear my mothers cries
All I could do
Was try find a world without you

We feared you
We fled you
But we could
Never escape you

Untill one dark night
I stopped you
And saw the fear
In your eyes

I went from boy to a man
To stop my mothers cries

I still look back with sadness
But I can still see my mothers pride
As I stand by her side

Boy to a man

In loving memory to my mother


Comments about Boy To A Man by Dave Alan Walker

  • Freshman - 614 Points Elena Plotkin (3/18/2015 9:33:00 AM)

    Powerful and raw! A reminder that children see all, feel all, and shoulder all! 10++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 494 Points Elaine Sept (3/16/2015 1:02:00 AM)

    Very powerful poem, full of emotion.
    A wonderful dedication! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/10/2015 3:17:00 AM)

    Boy to a man
    In loving memory to my mother....NICE LINES

    EACH BOY WANTS TO DEFEND
    AND SEND
    CLEAR SIGNAL
    THAT HE WILL COUNTER ANY PROBLEM ON ARRIVAL (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,644 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (3/4/2015 12:25:00 AM)

    To stop my mothers cries

    I still look back with sadness
    But I can still see my mothers pride
    As I stand by her side.......beautiful description. Deep feeling. Nicely envisioned. Many thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,644 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (3/4/2015 12:23:00 AM)

    To stop my mothers cries

    I still look back with sadness
    But I can still see my mothers pride
    As I stand by her side.......beautiful description. Deep feeling. Nicely envisioned. Many thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,622 Points Edward Kofi Louis (2/8/2015 4:59:00 AM)

    True work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

    E.K.L. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,908 Points Kim Barney (1/15/2015 8:46:00 PM)

    Very touching and heartfelt. I enjoyed this well-written poem very much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,683 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (11/7/2014 6:57:00 AM)

    many men of all generations can be easily connected with this poem..Well done..Dave (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,352 Points Amitava Sur (10/22/2014 9:42:00 PM)

    Dear Dave - You just won my heart and congratulation for this feat.

    Simply I'd say... BOLD AND BEAUTIFUL ................. 10 on 10 (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,025 Points Bernard Snyder (10/22/2014 5:40:00 PM)

    Well-written poem, Dave! Touching at the same time. Job well-done. I'm giving a 10'. Also, congrats on your poem being chosen as 'poem of the day! Well-deserved! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/22/2014 3:32:00 AM)

    very strong poem on love and emotion- feelings are thundered with rain- full of pain..Alas! we would have been hated those fathers they are spoiling and torturing and hurting to our mother Earth..very strongly ye composed and painted hidden love unto father..thank you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/22/2014 2:43:00 AM)

    Great! You capture it all. No boy or man will ever forget the pains his mother pass through. May the soul of your mother be blissful forever (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,734 Points Geetha Jayakumar (10/22/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    A poem with a great meaning in it. It's very true, when a boy turn to a man, he will remember, all the pains of his mother. But he will display the hurt, when he grows up and will stand by her. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,487 Points Valerie Dohren (10/22/2013 11:23:00 AM)

    Very sad, but also very beautiful. Your distress here is very clear, and your well deserved pride. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,964 Points Savita Tyagi (10/22/2013 8:18:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem on a very sensitive subject. A man is so often not willing to give respect to his wife but the same man backs out to give space to his son to become a man. This power play so common in social structure. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,594 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (10/22/2013 5:42:00 AM)

    You have said about the sad feelings of a boy who could not prevent his father troubling the mother; but later as he grows into an adolescent man, he could see the fear In his father's eyes. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 159 Points Husna Amin (10/22/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    Beautifully poignant! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 920 Points Leslie Philibert (10/22/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    well written poem with an introspective, confessional character.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,236 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/16/2013 12:54:00 AM)

    I respect your reverence for your mom, we all love our mom so much! A very painful, unpleasant situation has been poignantly portrayed in the poem. My two cents on this:
    When parents are at odds with each other, it's best if the oddities can be solved without involving the children. Children taking side with either of the parents is indeed very unhealthy. May be, in this case, the transgression was limitless, but many a time it has been seen that a quarreling couple can solve their problem, or at least come to acceptable terms, when left to themselves without outside interference. We all have anger and the Satan constantly conspires to break it loose. Again we all have love in our hearts, love fights anger and brings peace at home. May be too idealistic, why not give it a try? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,174 Points Ramesh Rai (10/23/2012 3:53:00 AM)

    my frnd a genius, will be remembered till there is mom n son for every son it is a nice gift. congratulation n for this beautiful poem that came in your mind. creation of poetry is fully on god who inspires us and once again congratulation for being inspired by god to create such an outstanding poem. best wishes to u and your family.in kolkata durga puja is being celebrated and a lot of greetings on this auspicious occassion. best of alll (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 22, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, August 12, 2013


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