Green In Love Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Green In Love

Rating: 5.0


House is the name of greenery of a woman,
who springs colorful flowers.
Nature sends her messengers
in the shape of honey bees
and pretty butterflies.
Who cares for a paradise
if he gets a woman
who is green in love.
When I see a beautiful house,
it's secret of beauty,
is not hidden to me,
let me reveal,
there must be a woman,
a beautiful wife,
a mother so lovely,
a kind daughter-in-law,
who knows the art,
of concealing her tears,
in beautiful smiles.
Again a secret I reveal,
when a woman like this,
smiles in her house,
nature smiles with her!

Green In Love
Tuesday, December 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: house,woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 December 2015

Very amazing explanation is made of green house love. Nature mother smiles and a beautiful mother's love regulate pleasantness of home environment. Fantastic idea shared with reality.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 December 2015

Five Liner. Flowers - Poem by Valsa George is very wisely and nicely and poetically reviewed by you. The comment itself is a beautiful poem and this is a nice tribute to her too. Always you do literary miracles that attract attention of readers. Interesting poem is composed from imagery of heart and nicely painted here.10

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Manonton Dalan 08 December 2015

your garden reflects your heart...thanks for sharing

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Nosheen Irfan 08 December 2015

What a beautiful, heart-warming poem. Mesmerizing imagery, captivating title.10

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M Asim Nehal 08 December 2015

The co-relation established by you between the colour green and the different shades of a woman is fantastic and noteworthy, in which ever stage she be her only objective is to keep the surroundings green and clean.....10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2021

A magnificent love poem sir.... captivating expression! Loved reading this sweet poem!

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Khalid Saifullah 16 July 2017

A beautiful poem...how nicely the beauty of a house is described.

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 17 December 2015

this is very beautiful sir...thanks for sharing..

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Bisma Mirza 10 December 2015

Beautiful poem really... Amazing! ! 10 on 10..

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Valsa George 09 December 2015

Men make houses.... women make homes.... is a popular saying! Yes, a woman with a green thumb turns her house beautiful with a lovely garden. With her love she becomes a cheerful presence to everyone and with her sacrifice, she rears up her children and never shows her sorrows or mood swings before others. Even when tired, she shows a cheerful disposition. But only a few like you can see her greatness! Enjoyed this lovely tribute to women!

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