(Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

, Hand-Haying

The rhythm of the scythe plume
In the summer heat.
The step-by, step-by cadence
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  • Heather Wilson (2/10/2013 4:28:00 PM)

    So true to life write, I was brought up out in the country, I remember my dad using a scythe, also being told the dangers of it, I was always amazed at what it could achieve.

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  • Paul Brookes (12/29/2012 1:02:00 PM)

    Beautiful..................................: O)

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  • John Brown (10/28/2012 10:52:00 AM)

    Great poem. I love the third line.

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  • Maria B (9/12/2012 8:53:00 PM)

    ... hands like leather/that never knew the shade. Wonderful. The rhyming works very well in this poem Adeline. Thank you for introducing me to your work.

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  • Renee' Marie (9/3/2012 1:55:00 PM)

    I love the imagery in this stanza: 'And the storms that rage a rocky coast
    Are music to the ears
    Of one who’s known their lonely cry
    All through his youthful years.

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  • Howard Johnson (6/10/2012 2:46:00 PM)

    A pleasure to read, full of rhythms, and imagery, !

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  • Nick Bell (5/22/2012 3:43:00 PM)

    I love this poem, it's so lovely and well written. :) - Nick

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  • Alexis ... (5/22/2012 3:25:00 PM)

    AWESOME! This is really good nice flow and really nice rhythm. I had to sow it to a friend she said it's an even better compliment when you see that they're a good poet and complimenting you thanks

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  • Patti Masterman (2/1/2012 10:33:00 PM)

    This is such beautiful verse. It gives a peaceful feeling too, like all's right with the world. Lovely piece, thank you.

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  • Smoky Hoss (12/27/2011 4:51:00 PM)

    Beautiful. I am sitting here listening to the beautiful music of Kate Wolf, her voice rings like the wonder and magic of long and wonderful memories, and so does this poem. I bailed hay the modern way (1970's!) , but still this poem brings back such great memories; thanks for writing it so well Adeline.
    May those yesterdays never leave us.

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