Happy Birthday Sweet Heart Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Happy Birthday Sweet Heart

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Rains bring many pretty charms for me,
But the charms are there for others too,
A beautiful gift of clouds, I mean you,
Came with the showers with arms for me,
That hugged me, hunted and hypnotized,
A model of beauty that truly mesmerized!

Years passed the cruel time didn’t stop,
I saw many changes that made you old,
For me you remained a glittering gold,
A song, a dance an amazing pop,
An old grandmother in the hot daylights,
A sweet sixteen in the moonlit nights!

A happy birthday, my fairy of dreams,
I miss you, I’m alone, and you are away,
But I see you on the Milky Way,
Your charms are flowing in the rainy streams,
Believe it or not you are sleeping on my arms,
With all your appeals and all your charms!

Happy Birthday Sweet Heart
Wednesday, July 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday greetings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 29 July 2015

I am only forty eight, I don't count the years before I met you, My life started when I met you, Or I am even younger than that, Because I subtract the time passed, That I loose due to your absence, A careful calculation, I passed only sixteen years with you, So what's wrong, If you find me only sixteen, A sweet sixteen!

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Kelly Kurt 30 July 2015

Such a lovely poem my friend.

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Bisma Mirza 30 July 2015

Very Beautiful poem.....its amazing! ! 10 on 10

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What a beautiful way to wish a dear beloved! Very well done, Sir. (10)

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Hazel Durham 30 July 2016

Outstanding write! I love this poem oozing love and passion for your beautiful wife, your words are like a rainbow full of colour like the love and joy in your heart. You express with such loving and tender lines to your beloved, you give her a gift of all that is in your heart on a page that dances with the great beauty of your love for her.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2015

Wonderful imagery. Beautiful poem. .....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2015

Wonderful imagery. Beautiful poem........10

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Ayman Parray 31 July 2015

Dear Akhtar, you have a beautiful heart and a wonderful art of writing! ! ! . Happy birthday and best wishes to the lady.

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Valsa George 30 July 2015

She will be on cloud nine receiving such a warm bouquet of greetings on her birthday from her beloved! I too wish her a Happy Birthday!

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