Human Instinct Poem by Aftab Alam

Human Instinct

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The human instinct

I watch enthusiastically -pigeons fly,
It gives me hope under the blue sky,
Courage that we acquire seeing them,
Vigor that we have up brim overwhelm

We have learnt flying, seeing them; birds
We have learnt swimming, seeing them; fishes
How one can forget the divine guidance?
This is truth my brethren and not a parlance,

Wednesday, February 18, 2015
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Susan Williams 18 November 2020

Yes, indeed- -> We have learnt flying, seeing them; birds We have learnt swimming, seeing them; fishes - - -> we learn many things from nature, sometimes the lesson is not so beautiful

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Susan Williams 18 November 2020

We have learnt flying, seeing them; birds We have learnt swimming, seeing them; fishes How one can forget the divine guidance? - - - > we learn many things from nature, sometimes the lesson is not so beautiful

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Savita Tyagi 18 February 2015

Very pleasant optimistic read with lovely rhyme.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 February 2015

Your employment of poetic simile is spot-on, Aftab...I enjoyed the read...Keep'em coming ~FjR~

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Sandra Feldman 18 February 2015

Yes, we have forgotten everything that is fine and glorious. The simple beauty, the true joy of life. Thank you for reminding us with this lovely lyrical poem.

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