Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

I Am A Dream Cage - Poem by Aftab Alam

I am a dream cage
With the wings of soul,
Dream flies,
‘Tis an internal phenomenon,
Yet seems to come in, through eyes,

What life, a blank page,
Inked by the hidden sage,
With dream it rise,
Act of sublime and wise,

Dream must not be an ice that melts,
Dream should be water to be frozen into ice,
Dream, the life's foot step; an indicating machine,
Be cool, keep patience, be nice.


Comments about I Am A Dream Cage by Aftab Alam

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (8/18/2014 12:34:00 AM)

    It is dreams that keep life afloat even when storms rage in life! So let us keep dreaming without allowing the dreams to melt away! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (8/16/2014 4:15:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem featuring lovely lines. someday lie will end but dreams can come true (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,601 Points Md Asadullah (8/15/2014 11:48:00 PM)

    One day Life will end but dreams will never end, nice poem, thanks for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,625 Points Neela Nath (8/15/2014 10:12:00 PM)

    Dream should be materialized.A beautiful profound poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,101 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/15/2014 12:41:00 PM)

    Dream must not be an ice that melts, Dream should be water to be frozen into ice,
    Lovely lines. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/15/2014 11:44:00 AM)

    Thoughtful write. Very true said,
    Dream must not be an ice that melts,
    Dream should be water to be frozen into ice,

    Dream should make one stronger like ice but cool and patient as well. Thanks for sharing the valuable thoughts. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2014



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