I Miss You Poem by Zeenat Fatima

I Miss You

Rating: 3.5


I miss you when I start my day
I miss you and your every way
I miss you wherever I go
I miss you in my work I do
I miss you when Am gonna sleep
I miss you in my thoughts so deep
I miss you in my sweetest dream
I miss you on opening my eyes
I miss you when my heart cries
I miss you in every task
Whether it's morning or the dark.
I miss your love and care for me
Which, among couples, I hardly see
I miss your face, I miss your style
I miss your shy and cutest smile.
I miss and I know, you too miss
That first, small and sensitive kiss..
But my sweetheart is far apart
And I miss u, miss u, miss u a lot...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to the special person in my life...: -)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 23 November 2012

beautifuly penned poem

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Xelam Kan™ 29 December 2012

ya everybody miss some one somewhere....... poem is quite simple but with color with true passion of love...... infact this missing is called love..... a true love ...... keep penning and definitely you will hold the pulse of rhyming and rhythmic composition.... do read good poets and chew over again and again..... baaqi baad ma kahon ga...... tnx fa sharing

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 November 2012

A fine adorable miss u poem. Do read mine too.

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Asif Andalib 22 November 2012

Lovely flow and beautiful expression of emotions. Keep it up

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Akhtar Jawad 14 October 2014

Missing someone everywhere reflects a true and sincere love. A nice poem.

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Indranil Bhaduri 10 January 2013

So romantic, so passionate, so heartfelt... thank you for sharing.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 30 December 2012

simple but passion of love... truly love.. raw bliss... emotion...

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 30 December 2012

simple but passion of love... truly love.. raw bliss... emotion...

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Kanav Justa 29 December 2012

I also wrote a poem similar to this.. but yours is way better than me.... nice work.. it was straight from your heart.. lovely write

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