Dwi utami

Rookie - 3 Points (11-11-1986 / Ngawi.jawa timur)

I'Need A Kiss - Poem by Dwi utami

Sunday is a holiday then we are going to that place.
That silent place full of silence, we are there standing,
we saw the so many coloured greenish leaves big trees.
so many birds, and butterflies decorating the blue sky
Then a butterfly dancing in the sky.
Together we Keep a released longing.
sitting near in the shallow river.
We see fishes in the depth so calm
We look up at the rainbow in the sky.
So many days you have never kiss me.
I'need a kiss, here in the silent place near in the river.
Trees, butterflies, fishes, please we are given a chance.to make a perfect kisses.
Here in the silent place.
My lips are longing after so many days you have never kiss me.
See my eyes, do you know my yearning?
Oh love***kiss me softly now*
everything will be quiet.
Just you and me enjoyed***kiss***
then my heart full of desire, you will know everything.
Your kiss fly with me.
Your kiss will stun me.
Your kiss will softly me soft.
Your kiss is sweet hearted.
Your kiss is a pray.
Your kiss is wanted
your kiss so bright
your kiss is everything.


Comments about I'Need A Kiss by Dwi utami

  • Rookie Subhajit Biswas (7/18/2010 3:29:00 AM)

    Nice1. Great. You a good poet. And i can see your poem geting high.. Very good. Tanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,914 Points Ken E Hall (7/16/2010 9:03:00 AM)

    Everyone should have a kiss...its the family bond even our poodle gets one,
    Your poem is quaint but needs a little editing for the grammer...keep at it
    kind regards That silent place of silence...great line (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Subhajit Biswas (7/16/2010 5:23:00 AM)

    Nice, poem, great poet you. That proved ur this poem, realy a great poet. And tanks, hop you more progresh in life, and people understand your values, ... Tanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/16/2010 3:42:00 AM)

    Ambience Silence Smooching the catalyst to bring closer and delet closure of spilling emotion from spoiling…lolol …nice poetry … congrats …
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 16, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 21, 2010


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