Dwi utami

Rookie - 3 Points (11-11-1986 / Ngawi.jawa timur)

The One God - Poem by Dwi utami

God more than anything else that I'must tellable about you?
You don't have one about ugly.
You are the owner a greenish of nature.
You are the owner a grandeur of the earthly life.
You are the owner a broad daylight the moon shine and sun.
The day and dark to be in your hand,
Sadness and happines to be on you.
Sent one of your angels.
To watch me deep to cross a life.
To embrance me deep in the all reason my life.
Some angel that never to owns a sin.
Angel with inmost soul a nable.
With shiny eyes.
White skin like a silk, long hair like a sea admirable.
Lips full of gantle, and the sweet word's
God of god..you are really my ideal.
Please listen to me in every I'haven't prayer.
Embrance me always deep on calmed
To arange me your heaven.
Wipe my tears in every I'haven't cry
To laugh with me in this moment I'haven't happines
Sent me a little love in every I'haven't open my eyes in the morning day.
God of god you are my ideal.


Comments about The One God by Dwi utami

  • Rookie - 1 Points Kolawole Ajao (7/18/2010 5:21:00 AM)

    I join you lift HIM high, Dwi. Sing-praise God more. A nice one.

    Thanks for showing us this. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Claudia Krizay (7/15/2010 9:06:00 AM)

    beautiful imagery here- well expressed! ! !

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  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/14/2010 2:14:00 PM)

    ‘You are the owner a grandeur of the earthly life.’ ~ Both the thumbs UP… Thanks for sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/13/2010 11:57:00 PM)

    [God of god-you are really my ideal]-a hymn of top ideal/we all can relate to (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 12, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 14, 2010


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