In A Wonderland Poem by Akhtar Jawad

In A Wonderland

Rating: 4.9


Don't know how in a wonderland,
It looks like earth, its landscape
Amazing color and attractive shape,
All round I see a grassy green land,
It's full of fragrant colorful flowers,
Fountains and falls for soothing showers!

Colorful flowers no chimneys of mills,
Jogging rivers that aren't steep,
Walk other bank it isn't too deep,
I see a palace in the valley of hills,
No signs yet of beasts or humans.
Animals, that are purely vegetarians!

I now started climbing on the hill,
No boundary wall no lock no gate,
I heard a voice, 'Go back, you're late.'
Go back to your world of heat and chill,
This land is meant for children and infants,
Neither for sages and nor for the saints!

Who died innocent before youth age,
Lucky enough not to kill anyone,
No sin with them to be undone,
Who never lived in a violence-cage,
Not for sinful women and men,
It's reserved for non-violent children!

Sunday, November 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nonviolence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rahman Henry 08 November 2015

Wonderful... Wonderland.... 'It's reserved for non-violent children! '....10++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2015

Amazing color and attractive shape, All round I see a grassy green land, ..Colorful flowers fill mind with new essence in such interesting poem shared with love. Wise sharing.10

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Amitava Sur 10 November 2015

Not for sinful women and men, It's reserved for non-violent children! ... A lovely imagery for a land with peace. Very nice. Thanks for sharing

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Seema Chowdhury 09 November 2015

very expressive and a colourful poetry, thanks for sharing

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Bisma Mirza 09 November 2015

Really Beautifull Poem............10 on 10

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Loke Kok Yee 09 November 2015

a special place reserved for them? thank you sir

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Kelly Kurt 09 November 2015

The innocence of children is special. Thanks, Akhtar

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