In The Shadow Of The Leafless Tree Poem by Rani Turton

In The Shadow Of The Leafless Tree

Rating: 4.6


In the shadow of the leafless tree
I waited, alone with melancholy
There was nobody, nobody around
To touch, speak and see.

In the shadow of the ruined stone walls
I sat and spun my fate;
Time was passing by
But I continued to patiently wait.

In the shadow of a moonlit night
I counted the birds of prey;
I walked in to the sound of swishing boughs
And my soul then tried to pray.

I walked on with my shadow, as though
It was my greatest friend
No companion could be more faithful
To me until the journey's end.

Copyright: Rani Turton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
thomas carolan 24 November 2009

very well placed I feel and see and walked in this shadow

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

O’ what a beautiful bouquet you splay before us -

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Marilyn Lott 10 October 2009

Such beautiful words your poem holds. We will, indeed, be with ourselves until the end, therefor it's so important to be the kind of person we will always love. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Kesav Easwaran 04 October 2009

the irony in the expressions 'leafless' and 'shadow' speaks volume of the intense pain the poem carries...good work...10

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Patti Masterman 03 October 2009

Rani this is truly beautiful. I love the occluded landscape. It's true; we will always have ourselves until our last instant of life; it's nice to sometimes think of that before the final breath is looming, don't you think? thanks..(smile)

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