Is It Me? Poem by John Carter Brown

Is It Me?

Rating: 2.8


I look at myself, and who do I see?
I see the me I used to be,
Not the one that other people see;
The question be, which one is me?

(Written May 2014)

Saturday, May 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mystery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 31 May 2014

cute little rhyme :)

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Nathan Coppedge 31 May 2014

I challenge you to make this into a longer poem without failing to rhyme. That might be the right thing to do with this gem!

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Mary Forrester 01 June 2014

Really liked this one, brought a smile to my face.

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Tadasha Tripathy 06 June 2014

Not the one that other people see; .With this line this is a heart touching poem.I liked it very much.

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Noreen Carden 17 June 2014

I know that feeling nice write John

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Shiela Sane 05 January 2023

I enjoy the rhythm of his poetry, it Led

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Babatunde Aremu 10 July 2014

Our opinion of ourselves matter a lot. Good job! thanks for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2014

The question is - does the one we see in the mirror reflect our true self, or the self we think we are. Food for thought here John.

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Connie Yost 06 July 2014

This is a frequently asked question by lots of us, John, I am sure. So nice to see it put into words.

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Joseph Anderson 06 July 2014

John-you got it all said so very well in just four brief lines. Perhaps we all should take a look. Does your mirror need cleaning? This does provoke some room for thought.Worth a higher rating

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