John Carter Brown


Is it me?


I look at myself, and who do I see?
I see the me I used to be,
Not the one that other people see;
The question be, which one is me?

(Written May 2014)

Submitted: Saturday, May 31, 2014

Topic of this poem: mystery


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  • Veteran Poet - 1,742 Points Babatunde Aremu (7/10/2014 7:32:00 AM)

    Our opinion of ourselves matter a lot. Good job! thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,082 Points Valerie Dohren (7/7/2014 2:41:00 PM)

    The question is - does the one we see in the mirror reflect our true self, or the self we think we are. Food for thought here John. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Connie Yost (7/6/2014 6:26:00 PM)

    This is a frequently asked question by lots of us, John, I am sure. So nice to see it put into words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 259 Points Joseph Anderson (7/6/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    John-you got it all said so very well in just four brief lines. Perhaps we all should take a look. Does your mirror need cleaning? This does provoke some room for thought.Worth a higher rating (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,360 Points Noreen Carden (6/17/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    I know that feeling nice write John (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 532 Points Silvi Tripathy (6/6/2014 10:37:00 AM)

    Not the one that other people see; .With this line this is a heart touching poem.I liked it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 620 Points Mary Forrester (6/1/2014 2:48:00 PM)

    Really liked this one, brought a smile to my face. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 154 Points Nathan Coppedge (5/31/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    I challenge you to make this into a longer poem without failing to rhyme. That might be the right thing to do with this gem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 277 Points Ruth Walters (5/31/2014 1:13:00 PM)

    cute little rhyme :) (Report) Reply

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