Time is never same
It keeps on changing
So is the relationships.
Once placed with respect
Had shattered me
Into pieces.
Tears have dried up
Pain has frozen into ice
Nothing can grow in dry land
Its got dried forever
Think train left forever
Never to come back.
Many a times broken
Mirror cannot be mended
Even if broken thread tied together
Will always show a knot in it.
Which will always haunt
Me like sorrow.
A scar will remain.
Lets travel like an unknown passenger
Even if we ever happen to meet..
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© 2014.
Geetha Jayakumar.
Even if broken thread tied together Will always show a knot in it. it shows your skill as an observer.
Wonderful! The train departed would sure to come back. But the thread tied cannot hide the knot. People buy a new mirror, a new colourful thread and try a new relationship. But the excellence of virtue of the heroine in this poem lies in her preference to be strangers if she meets that man who shattered her dreams of a happy life. Unusual theme/central idea makes the poem stand apart from the rest. *****
So true the pain of broken relationships leaves a deep and permanent scar that never heals! I really enjoyed this original and great write!
It was strange it was there, and it's even stranger it's gone and life is stranger than fiction....Geetha.......this is a very good piece, loved its theme of being strangers and lead life remaining strangers.......well composed....10
congratulation on being #one in India great most deserving Geetha
Let's wander in wilderness like a nomad! ! ! A good poem! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is great... Poetically and emotionally delivered. You are a goddess of pen. Kudos, bravo. Geetha jayakumar.