Let The Ice Melt Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Let The Ice Melt

Rating: 5.0


States at normal temperature and pressure is the state I need
So is water that falls from the clouds in the shape of showers,
That flows in the rivers dancing like a virgin in first love,
That adds puberty to the plants to bloom beautiful flowers.

Steam may be a need of steam engines and turbines,
My flush loves to watch steam out from a hot drink
Snow may be a need of mountains to hide their dents
Ice cubes are sexy in a glass when they melt and shrink

Let The Ice Melt
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Being inspired a post of Kelly Kurt, a few photographs, one I attached.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 13 March 2019

A nice poem indeed on the different shapes matter takes as per its quality and what our mind sees in it. A nice photograph too. Enjoyed.

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Khalida Bano Ali 14 March 2019

Normality is the best beauty.....................

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 July 2023

Ice cubes are sexy in a glass when they melt and shrink...very keen poetic observation dear poet.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 March 2019

superb poetic expression on natural form of ICE - Snow may be a need of mountains to hide their dents Ice cubes are sexy in a glass...//

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 March 2019

What you see that few can is poetry, What you say the way few can is poetry. Unique imagery, the poem is eminently readable, nay enjoyable..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2019

What a wonderful poem that brings out the.beauty in everything. The superb imagery of this write takes a reader to be one with nature. Brilliant verses that depict the minutest details of beauty. A.great poem well crafted..10++++

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Kelly Kurt 14 March 2019

Your beautiful words have made this photo come alive.

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