Kara Aleid was Thomas


Life As We Know... - Poem by Kara Aleid was Thomas

When I begin to write
My world because right
So here I am a
Writer with inspiration and passion
With words so fine.

My world... My music
All meaning something to me,
My family, my love,
Oh! So much is meant for me.

My tiredness, my pain
Something that makes me feels shame
It leaves me wordless
And hopeless with nothing
Else to possibly say.

My meaningful life says
More than I can write
As I say good bye I leave
With their lies and of
course my fake smile.


Comments about Life As We Know... by Kara Aleid was Thomas

  • Rookie - 4 Points Khalid Loves Cara More (12/16/2011 1:29:00 AM)

    You don't have to fake smile no more baby, am making you smile as much as I can and I hope your cheeks can stand it ;) xxxxxxxxxxxx (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Simbarashe Moyo (10/24/2011 2:08:00 PM)

    i loved this one. one of my favourites. this is wonderful. i feel inspired (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (6/14/2011 9:20:00 AM)

    Very nice poem, it expresses nicely about how you fell about life and its pains and wonders with depth, well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (6/13/2011 1:27:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style.
    Great write indeed.
    I give it 10/10.
    Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 21, 2011


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