Kara Aleid was Thomas


- I Bet It Sucks To Be You Right Now. - Poem by Kara Aleid was Thomas

I wanted to be friends but you wanted to be more
so i gave you what I thought was my all
But then it was token
and my heart was broken.

How could you do this?
what did i do so wrong?

You took every moment
and an left me with you terrible memory's.

do you still think you did the right thing?
because i still think how wrong i was to let you in my territory
you teared me apart so bad
i was clearly stupid.

My heart just wouldn't let out!
i hate you with all my heart missing parts
How could you hurt me so bad
i Dont know what i did to deserve this.

If you ever come back ill walk away just like you did to me,
i'll never let someone hurt me as bad as you did.

- I bet it sucks to be you right now.


Comments about - I Bet It Sucks To Be You Right Now. by Kara Aleid was Thomas

  • Rookie - 226 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/20/2011 3:37:00 PM)

    I can see ' sad and despair' in this poem... So nicely written.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Stefanie Fontker (9/18/2011 10:19:00 AM)

    Very interesting poem. Your despair is evident in this, and it's made the poem beautiful and raw. I hope all works out for you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 66 Points Craig Anderson (9/18/2011 9:43:00 AM)

    Really sad emotional read. But enthralling all the same. People like to see inside someone elses world and you managed it perfectly.
    Regards and Peace.
    Craig (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 18, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 25, 2012


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