Light Poem by Amitava Sur

Light

Rating: 5.0


My
Life’s
Light
You
Did
Put
Off,
By
Snatching
My
Keen
Love.

Put
On
The
Divine
Light
Now,
By
Waking
Me
Up.

Give
Me
The
Wisdom
And
Bestow
Your
Love.

Give me give me give me Your bliss
Show me the path to unchain the griefs.
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Amitava (6.3.2014) 6-00 am.

Friday, March 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: god
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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Amitava (6.3.2014) 6-00 am.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 09 March 2014

Light up the world with love and bliss. Love was once loss but now will be regained. Nice.

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Roseann Shawiak 09 March 2014

Sounds like you've been hurt intensely through grief, asking God to give wisdom and love to help you get through it, to unchain the sorrow of grief. Very heart- wrenching and yet poetic. Love it. RoseAnn

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Lyn Paul 07 March 2014

Give light to all in need. Thankyou Amitava

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Valsa George 07 March 2014

The poem has the structure of a steady flame rising from a diya! Your supplication for light to the Almighty will be answered! Enjoyed!

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