Valsa George


Limericks,9,10, A Worm On My Back, A Naughty Boy - Poem by Valsa George

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A worm on my back

Wriggle wiggle waggle ugly little worm
How I dread to see your pliable form
On my back you jiggle and crawl
Tickling me to wobble and howl
Leaving me itchy and scratchy as you squirm


The Naughty Boy

A naughty boy lived beside a sloping rock
Once he ran up the shelf so steep
A chip of the rock gave way
The boy lost his sway
Ouch! Landed on his cushioned bum in a creek


Comments about Limericks,9,10, A Worm On My Back, A Naughty Boy by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 26,903 Points Akhtar Jawad (1/9/2015 6:55:00 PM)

    Magical two but in fact it's beauty of the poetess who described the two so nicely................10 (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 994 Points Nika Mcguin (5/29/2014 5:51:00 PM)

    I like that despite having different themes these poems relate to each other perfectly. It feels like going on a camping trip. These two things could be happening simultaneously and in the same place. They both have a very natural connectedness to them. The odd thing is the video/music that PH has supplied doesn't suit the tone of these lively, playful poems, such a shame! Regardless together or apart they are a joy to read.

    ~Nika (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,017 Points Paul Sebastian (5/18/2014 7:33:00 AM)

    Limericks! Valsa, you write so beautifully, worm or child! You should write and publish nursery rhymes! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (5/14/2014 11:08:00 AM)

    The duo magic of limerick all throughout the lines! Let this worm be on this naughty boy for a while... Ha ha ha.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,971 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (5/12/2014 11:40:00 PM)

    Very insightful and wonderfully composed limericks..........Valsa.....hidden meaning so astounding.......great write
    ever............... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,606 Points Bri Edwards (5/12/2014 5:01:00 PM)

    VALSA, i already knew you detest snails, but cute little old worms? ? ? ? ! i like this tale of woe. may all your worms fall from you and never return! but i'd rather have them on the outside than the inside, ....i think.

    thanks for sharing. ;) bri

    Some Say Cushioned

    Some say cushioned, some say fat....
    when referring to on-what-the-boy-sat.
    Needless to say it's nice sometimes to have extra stuff.....
    when the trail's sloppy OR slopey and the going's tough. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,967 Points Kee Thampi (5/11/2014 11:34:00 PM)

    A naughty boy lived beside a sloppy rock
    Once he ran up the shelf so steep
    A chip of the rock gave way
    The boy lost his sway
    Ouch! Landed on his cushioned bum in a creek

    very naughty poem on a boy of joy.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 832 Points Om Chawla (5/9/2014 7:52:00 AM)

    Beautifully rhymed and interesting enjoyable read. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,634 Points Salini Nair (5/9/2014 6:17:00 AM)

    good rhyme...like it madam (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,352 Points Tajudeen Shah (5/9/2014 4:15:00 AM)

    yes, dear bard blessed, we the readers do feel all those expressions you drawn with wonderful words on us right the moment! the naughty one's fate too is hilarious, as someone jotted right. relieving in between the most engaging. true. rgds. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,338 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/8/2014 11:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful and hilarious. These little interludes make writing and reading more interesting. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (5/7/2014 2:53:00 AM)

    excellent rhyme scheme, love the first one more. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,840 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/7/2014 2:09:00 AM)

    Wonderful, I enjoyed both with deep meanings , thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 7, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 13, 2014


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