DOG'S BARK
In Greece, lived a young lad called Mark
All he craved was to sing like a lark
After intense training for long
With expert help all along
As he sang, it sounded like a dog's bark
CAT'S MEW
A pussy cat seeing some milk inside a pot,
Ignorant, it would become a Gordian knot,
Put her head inwards.
Alas, the pot turned upwards
With head jammed inside, she mewed distraught!
valsa, PLEASE! A valiant effort you've made indeed, but NOT all poems are for me to read. Because you're my friend i read both to the end, but don't write more of THEM, i plead! but SERIOUSLY, i give you a quite good score. thanks for sharing. bri :)
I had a hearty laugh reading these limericks. I know for sure that if someone challenges, you win.
It seems that the challenge has ended the cat and dog both surrendered alas no art was offended in high hand' and a town sleeps safe in Ireland.
I don't know what the challenge was but on reading the two limericks, it does not matter., the laugh comes good anyway.
I can just see that distraught cat...hope that Gordian knot gets sliced off. These are gems, Valsa. To myfavourites.
As he sang, it sounded like a dog's bark......ha..ha..ha..so funny. In second Limerick....Cat put her head inwards in a pot is interesting but she mewed distraught is sad. Beautifully penned both limerick. Thanks for sharing.
Real beauty lies in simplicity, Could lough heartily, very nice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
both great, but the first one is superb!