Valsa George

Limericks,7,8 (Dog's Bark/ Cat's Mew) - Poem by Valsa George


In Greece, lived a young lad called Mark
All he craved was to sing like a lark
After intense training for long
With expert help all along
As he sang, it sounded like a dog's bark


A pussy cat seeing some milk inside a pot,
Ignorant, it would become a Gordian knot,
Put her head inwards.
Alas, the pot turned upwards
With head jammed inside, she mewed distraught!

Topic(s) of this poem: limerick

Poet's Notes about The Poem

In response to Bri Edwards' challenge!

Comments about Limericks,7,8 (Dog's Bark/ Cat's Mew) by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 44,342 Points Akhtar Jawad (12/15/2014 4:26:00 AM)

    An interesting write...................................... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 17,112 Points Amitava Sur (10/18/2013 10:36:00 PM)

    Real beauty lies in simplicity, Could lough heartily, very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,489 Points Patricia Grantham (10/18/2013 9:43:00 AM)

    NO lark for Mark and no milk for the cat. Both have been
    short changed and that is that! Had a good laugh.
    Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (10/15/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    It seems that the challenge has ended
    the cat and dog both surrendered
    alas no art was offended in high hand'
    and a town sleeps safe in Ireland. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,204 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/15/2013 6:39:00 PM)

    I had a hearty laugh reading these limericks. I know for sure that if someone challenges, you win. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,743 Points Bri Edwards (10/15/2013 4:20:00 PM)



    A valiant effort you've made indeed,
    but NOT all poems are for me to read.
    Because you're my friend
    i read both to the end,
    but don't write more of THEM, i plead!

    but SERIOUSLY, i give you a quite good score. thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,530 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (10/15/2013 11:56:00 AM)

    When the pussy cat mewed, Why not Mark sing like a lark? It is injustice! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (10/15/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    I sympathasise with Mark and feel sad about every pussy cat of this tribe. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,225 Points Kavya . (10/15/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    a hilarious one..........gud write (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (10/15/2013 4:41:00 AM)

    Original and entertaining limericks. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (10/15/2013 3:53:00 AM)

    both great, but the first one is superb! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 12, 2015

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