Valsa George


Limericks,7,8 (Dog's Bark/ Cat's Mew) - Poem by Valsa George

DOG'S BARK

In Greece, lived a young lad called Mark
All he craved was to sing like a lark
After intense training for long
With expert help all along
As he sang, it sounded like a dog's bark

CAT'S MEW

A pussy cat seeing some milk inside a pot,
Ignorant, it would become a Gordian knot,
Put her head inwards.
Alas, the pot turned upwards
With head jammed inside, she mewed distraught!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

In response to Bri Edwards' challenge!

Comments about Limericks,7,8 (Dog's Bark/ Cat's Mew) by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 37,976 Points Akhtar Jawad (12/15/2014 4:26:00 AM)

    An interesting write...................................... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,233 Points Amitava Sur (10/18/2013 10:36:00 PM)

    Real beauty lies in simplicity, Could lough heartily, very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,240 Points Patricia Grantham (10/18/2013 9:43:00 AM)

    NO lark for Mark and no milk for the cat. Both have been
    short changed and that is that! Had a good laugh.
    Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (10/15/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    It seems that the challenge has ended
    the cat and dog both surrendered
    alas no art was offended in high hand'
    and a town sleeps safe in Ireland. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,965 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/15/2013 6:39:00 PM)

    I had a hearty laugh reading these limericks. I know for sure that if someone challenges, you win. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,159 Points Bri Edwards (10/15/2013 4:20:00 PM)

    valsa,

    PLEASE!

    A valiant effort you've made indeed,
    but NOT all poems are for me to read.
    Because you're my friend
    i read both to the end,
    but don't write more of THEM, i plead!

    but SERIOUSLY, i give you a quite good score. thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,061 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (10/15/2013 11:56:00 AM)

    When the pussy cat mewed, Why not Mark sing like a lark? It is injustice! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (10/15/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    I sympathasise with Mark and feel sad about every pussy cat of this tribe. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,828 Points Kavya . (10/15/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    a hilarious one..........gud write (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (10/15/2013 4:41:00 AM)

    Original and entertaining limericks. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,265 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (10/15/2013 3:53:00 AM)

    both great, but the first one is superb! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 12, 2015


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