A breath of a breeze
Tousles my hair
As moss laden trees
Soften sun's glare
Jasmine vines twined
'Round the old wooden post
And upward they climbed
To heaven almost
Heavy with fragrance
As sweet as your heart
I stood in the garden
Till day did depart
The scent caused a sigh
And broken heart fears
The flower's a sign
Of lost Love and Tears
A lovely picture you drew with the jasmine vines where the traces of both joy and fear was there, enjoyed.
Memories of love and tears brought on by intoxication of the flowers love fragrance...powerful poem bringing on loneliness as I feel it...regards
the opposites dealt with in a lovely verse poetic charming and great read liked
The flower remembers The Love and Joys - happy ending and nothing fears
Heavy with fragrance As sweet as your heart I stood in the garden Till day did depart...... lost love and tears. human mind, human heart, its desires, its sense of loss, its craving for love. all these came in your poem. thank you very much. it was a pleasure to read your poem thank you. tony
words used are soft but are of heavy meaning.alternate rhyme scheme is nicely used.nicely written madam.
Watching daylight disappear while standing in the garden, seeing the flowers hiding their faces from the twilight, their scent now gone like love being lost. Nature's sign of loss and tears! Beautiful imagery and rhythm, soulful feelings hiding beneath the imagery, a really great poem! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Or a sign of new growth here now! Look up again, unfurrow your brow! Grab love, give it, tis everywhere in the vines, in your hair! Lovely poem you wrote!