Fay Slimm

Rookie - 86 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Lovely Moonlight. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Droplets of utter delight
Adorn the fall of moonlight.

Soundless, pale allure splashes
Beams over trees, lattices
All the night-time scenery,
And envelopes even me.

Oh clair de la lovely moon,
Shine his way here to me soon.

Light our feathered bed, do stay
Hiding us, 'til break of day.
My secret love and I need
Your faint clandestine intrigue.

Comments about Lovely Moonlight. by Fay Slimm

  • Janell Cressman (10/31/2009 11:57:00 PM)

    wow amazing poem! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Patti Masterman (10/31/2009 11:13:00 PM)

    This is charming and you've captured the allure and twinkle of the moon I think..(smile) (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury Sarwar Chowdhury (10/30/2009 1:52:00 PM)

    fine wording! awesome poem!
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (10/24/2009 3:34:00 PM)

    The moon, like snow, touches a landcape with glamour.
    You have captured the magic in this beautiful
    lyric. I like what you see through the ageless
    panes of your soul.10+++.


    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (10/24/2009 8:01:00 AM)

    I was drawn into the moon's pull with its, could I dare to say a wee bit of seduction. Beautifully written Fay......10 Karin (Report) Reply

  • Georgia Girl (10/19/2009 11:24:00 AM)

    such gorgeous imagery, I LOVE the glow of the full moon on the earth and grass and everything...beautiful write Fay...10 (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (10/17/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    Hey Fay.

    This is such a beautiful poem. You use the kinda of words that keep the reader spellbound to your poems.. Very lovely to read...10++

    Shan (Report) Reply

  • Carol Gall (10/17/2009 4:51:00 AM)

    moonlight sounds so mysterious 10 fay (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 6, 2011

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