Dancing with greenest
Of fresh-leaved dress,
The trees have awakened
Come lately, - - - shook
Down their winter-drab,
Roots loosened, new tresses
Bob lightly in warm spring.
This year Maytime took
Longer to show, but she's
Come, - - - floating white
Train trailing her blossoms.
Each hedgerow ablaze
With petaling snow - - -
Faintly scented, - - - alight
And glowing, - - May's bridal
Show is - - amazing.
What more cause for delight
Than, - - - come lately
Another revival
To which we relate?
Beautiful vivid write Fay...I think nature is rapidly becoming your best theme...this is wonderful...Fi 10++++
Lovely seasonal poem Fay, very much enjoyed. Descriptive and full of wonderment Steve
Such a celebration of flowing welcoming imagery for May's late arrival. The first two lines danced with me to find blossoms, petaling snow, a bridle show and so much more. How you made my heart sing with happiness Fay. Top marks! Karin Anderson
Very Fresh Fay! Nice flow of words......love the tempo and imageries...! 10+
very nice poem, written eloquently.you become lost whilst in reading
Wow! Very artfully portrayed the Incoming May though late but still feels pleasant. The ecology seems to have uplifted itself enchanting the surroundings.....10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Picturesque, vibrant and sunny - this fresh and lively poem leaves the reader's heart crammed with the sights and scents of Spring. S :)