Fay Slimm

Rookie - 33 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

May's Come Lately. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Dancing with greenest
Of fresh-leaved dress,
The trees have awakened
Come lately, - - - shook
Down their winter-drab,
Roots loosened, new tresses
Bob lightly in warm spring.
This year Maytime took
Longer to show, but she's
Come, - - - floating white
Train trailing her blossoms.
Each hedgerow ablaze
With petaling snow - - -
Faintly scented, - - - alight
And glowing, - - May's bridal
Show is - - amazing.
What more cause for delight
Than, - - - come lately
Another revival
To which we relate?


Comments about May's Come Lately. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie - 118 Points Rani Turton (5/3/2009 12:00:00 PM)

    Lovely poem about renewal that is bright and aerien. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Tom Balch (5/1/2009 2:51:00 PM)

    This is a lovely piece about May, well penned Fay, regards Tom (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Delicate Heart (5/1/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    very nice poem, written eloquently.you become lost whilst in reading (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Meggie Gultiano (4/28/2009 12:27:00 AM)

    this is a very pleasant write and a pleasure to read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sameer Ahmed (4/27/2009 6:28:00 AM)

    Wow! Very artfully portrayed the Incoming May though
    late but still feels pleasant. The ecology seems to have
    uplifted itself enchanting the surroundings.....10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Juneil Sechico (4/27/2009 12:56:00 AM)

    Very Fresh Fay! Nice flow of words......love the tempo and imageries...! 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (4/25/2009 7:42:00 AM)

    Such a celebration of flowing welcoming imagery for May's late arrival. The first two lines
    danced with me to find blossoms, petaling snow, a bridle show and so much more. How you made my heart sing with happiness Fay. Top marks! Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stephen Stirk (4/24/2009 6:12:00 AM)

    Lovely seasonal poem Fay, very much enjoyed. Descriptive and full of wonderment
    Steve (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (4/24/2009 5:00:00 AM)

    Beautiful vivid write Fay...I think nature is rapidly becoming your best theme...this is wonderful...Fi 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Susan Jarvis (4/24/2009 4:42:00 AM)

    Picturesque, vibrant and sunny - this fresh and lively poem leaves the reader's heart crammed with the sights and scents of Spring. S :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 16, 2009


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