Meadfoot Beach. Poem by Fay Slimm

Meadfoot Beach.

Rating: 5.0


Cloudless the day with blue vaulting it's way
Into the air and sea. Running the length
Of the cove and foaming at breakpoint, swaying
Wavelets, their cotton-wool edgings resenting
Speed, shushed by the tide, begin gentle ride
To shore with lullaby sound, they reach ground
And flatten, soundlessly. Canoes come gliding
The length of the shimmering bay, around
Yachts, tacking in breeze, and all become one
With the flickering diamond-struck cove, millpond
Still, and quiet today, Meadfoot beach shone.
Cafe' chairs askew, we laughed as fondly,
Owners training young dog tried practising
Alongside sandy waves, but puppy, foam-
Struck, chased away when called, and came back
Dancing wet delight, so was taken home.

As children battled to keep castles dry
From tide, I head home, whispering goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 20 April 2009

Great imagery Fay...sounds like a beautiful place to be....Fi 10+++

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Sue Sie 13 April 2009

A great write...with lots of detail in content. This presented a fine picture of daily activities at the beach...10+ Sue x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 April 2009

A day at the beach sounds so nice Fay... Andy 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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