Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 135 Points (Kolkata, India)

Mermaid - Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

You came like the gushy wind
Blowing me away with your might,
You came with your dreams unlimited
Embracing me with your warmth.
You looked at my eyes,
With unspoken words of love
Your brief murmurs in the air
Enlightened the lonesome soul
I wish.. I could feel you,
Kiss your sweet lips
With my everlasting passion
And ignite the fire within us..
See, it's a dream coming true
For us, swimming in the vast ocean
As I burn with ecstasy touching you
O My beautiful mermaid blue...

Copyright © 2014 Indranil Bhaduri


Comments about Mermaid by Indranil Bhaduri

  • Gold Star - 12,808 Points Edward Kofi Louis (3/19/2014 8:02:00 PM)

    A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this Poem with us.

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  • Rookie Moutusi Sen (2/3/2014 10:45:00 PM)

    Romance, passion, love. Impressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Crystal Conrick-knight (1/22/2014 10:07:00 AM)

    Beautifully written with such feeling and insight.interesting use of symbolism and motif. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,415 Points Hazel Durham (1/21/2014 1:38:00 PM)

    With great passion and desire for your mermaid blue of the vast ocean your dream comes true!
    Superb write! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,994 Points Patricia Grantham (1/7/2014 10:53:00 AM)

    A beautifully touching write. Your words are so passionately written
    it makes the reader feel the emotions. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 544 Points Silvi Tripathy (1/6/2014 10:04:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with overflowing dreams.I liked it.Happy new year sir. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 3, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, January 6, 2014


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