Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,409 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Morals - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In the streets of severed souls
lives the outlaws of right and wrong

In the houses of the government
lives money and greed

Comments about Morals by Dave Alan Walker

  • * Sunprincess * (4/3/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    ......wish all countries could agree to peace....destroy all weapons... and somehow eliminate the government and taxes... (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George Valsa George (3/27/2014 7:09:00 AM)

    Strong and forceful punch on the hypocritic wielders of power! Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely! (Report) Reply

  • Ahmed Abomahfouz Ahmed Abomahfouz (3/13/2014 3:57:00 PM)

    you said the truth in philosophic words (Report) Reply

  • Ahmed Abomahfouz Ahmed Abomahfouz (3/13/2014 3:57:00 PM)

    you said the truth in philosophic words (Report) Reply

  • Smoky Hoss (3/10/2014 4:52:00 PM)

    You pack a powerful punch in a few well placed words. (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Anderson (2/24/2014 12:55:00 PM)

    I thought it was only in America. You said it wellpAmen brother (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (2/24/2014 12:16:00 PM)

    A Beautiful poem. Very true said in few lines. Thanks for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr Hans Vr (2/22/2014 11:23:00 PM)

    Agree fully 66412with Valerie, so true, my friend (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (2/22/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    Outstanding quotes of this era. I am to share with my FB.Thank you so much for such fine write. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/12/2014 8:24:00 PM)

    State of affairs is nicely expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (2/12/2014 5:41:00 PM)

    So true Dave, so true. (Report) Reply

  • Umaprosad Das Umaprosad Das (2/11/2014 9:34:00 PM)

    Dear Poet Dave Alan Walker
    You've highlighted a bitter picture
    Of severed souls of streets on this earth
    Who struggle for food and shelter after birth
    Most of the govt. houses don't have any link
    Neither they bother for their betterment or think (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra Gajanan Mishra (2/9/2014 8:21:00 AM)

    money and greed are with govt, thanks,
    Please read my new poems. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, February 10, 2014

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