Eyan Desir

Rookie - 15 Points (caribbean)

...Mr. Cigarette


Wrapped in a cylinder
Tobacco's nicotine
Mixed with many flavors
Around soft paper

Watch a cigarette
See a cancer stick
Sentences to slowly
Split innocent lives

Buy a cigarette
An apostle of dead
With germs of Satan!
Working to make you rest

Ignite a cigarette
Taste additive pleasure
A drying's man liquor

Inhale a cigarette
Smell the perfume of dead
Slowing kissing your chest

Learn about cigarettes
Know he's not a friend!

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Pulished work of E.D
14th May 2009

Submitted: Thursday, May 14, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, June 24, 2009

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  • Rookie Guess who's back Angel Wade (6/13/2009 5:44:00 PM)

    this is really good for us young people because everybody i see thats around my age thats all they do and im like yall die early if yall don't stop.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~Crystal Midnight~ (6/7/2009 7:48:00 PM)

    Watch a cigarette
    See a cancer stick
    this is really good for kids... I always tell my parents when they smoke they are going to get cancer. cigarettes are so gross. I am glad you wrote this. good job.
    ~CM~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angel's lyre (6/3/2009 12:48:00 PM)

    AGREE! ! ! ! !
    I hope this poem will make some people not spoil their health.
    LIFE IS GIVEN ONCE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 283 Points Indira Renganathan (5/30/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Known truth knowingly shirked...fate of the present trend...excellent writing....kindly read my 'Agony' 'Beedi rollers', The Smoky Solomon'....Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kale Beaudry (5/27/2009 1:15:00 AM)

    Ah, one of the many things in this world that will kill you, but people do it anyways.
    I'm not sure if you meant 'addictive' where you spelt 'additive? '

    Pretty straightforward, but undoubtedly true; the kiss of death from a cigarettes breath. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (5/26/2009 11:43:00 PM)

    I am not a smoker but I can admire your Mr. Cigarette. Should be displaced
    everywhere. Smokeless 10 for this anti-smoking piece of write.
    Best Wishes
    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,288 Points Is It Poetry (5/26/2009 9:51:00 PM)

    it is death as i puff myself into the smooth tobacco leaf eternal embrace..im not Yul Brenner but cigarette smoking will kills ya...iip (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sangnam Nam (5/26/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    It was just a one day trying to smoke
    for a woman curious.

    You make it a whole life time
    scene in the media......I mean the smoking? ? ? ?

    WHY?

    Lisa Nam is Sangnam Nam is Nam (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Dreamer (5/26/2009 5:14:00 PM)

    I am not a smoker and hate it too, should use this on the bill boards, smoking shelters for Smokers to see, Very Good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philip Alarie (5/26/2009 3:44:00 PM)

    VERY good poem! I have a similar poem, which I wrote a while back- entitled: SMOKERS- please read and comment if you have the time! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alicia Cross (5/26/2009 7:18:00 AM)

    I love it. It is simple and proves a point. You brilliantly pieced this one together. Nice write. (Report) Reply

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