Amy Edson

Rookie - 57 Points (England)

My Life - Poem by Amy Edson

No more than what not asked for
as small as the dreams I don't have
as dull as a tint that I am sure
its goal is to making me sad.

More worse not being accepted by your peers
as dull as a cold winters day
if anything at all can change this
I pray to thy lord I will stay.

My love is there for anyone
do take it, it'll never be true
for my love has been lost in a tragedy
my love is lost 'ços of you.

Now noon be approaching
my life has come to a halt
my life was lost in a tragedy
not of which be my fault.

Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts

Comments about My Life by Amy Edson

  • Gold Star - 16,844 Points John Westlake (8/28/2014 6:27:00 PM)

    An interesting poem here. A few basic editing changes do need to be made, but apart from that I like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 20, 2014

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