You entered my world
didn't stay very long
You were in a hurry
had to get along
You entered my heart
for a little while
made me so happy
caused my heart to smile
you entered my mind
now you are gone
remaining a memory
I still sing our song
Very nicely composed....the world made of sweet memory........very nice
Beautiful poem. Very true said, beautiful things that happened in past, remains in our sweet memories forever. Loved reading it.
Poem with the sorrow contrast - remaining a memory I still sing our song, tears full eyes yet smile on face, and I must say- tears of the night or pearls of the day! , Woes of the heart or dancing feathers gay! Thank you Heather
Commemorates a relationship that has been sweet, but didn't last long! But its delightful memories still linger! Cute little poem marked by deep feelings!
A heart touching penning. Beloved may be physically not present now, but all those sweet memories of love persists afresh and that is th true love. . Thanks for sharing
You were in hurry had to get along. You entered my world. Very much expressive and heart touchable excellent poem.
Niee poem....10 Left behind world ukind for me to find not as a blind
A beautiful poem portraying the entry and exit of a beloved which still persists in memories and cherished by the poet.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
all happened remain as a memory....................beautiful...................