Heather Burns

My Valentine - Poem by Heather Burns

If we could
have met
when we were
very young
you would
have been
my love of

my passion
my valentine

I would
have loved
you never

My heart
would wrap
around you
forming an
you from
this world

However fate
for seen this
A love like
this is not

we must deal
with what we
have been

Comments about My Valentine by Heather Burns

  • Gold Star - 7,245 Points Sekharan Pookkat (7/22/2013 8:03:00 PM)

    Long live true friendship (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (7/22/2013 7:54:00 AM)

    Shhhhhhh, not too loudly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (7/22/2013 5:22:00 AM)

    Everything is decided by destiny. We should count our blessings if at least we remain as friends forever instead of loosing them. A great poetic tribute by honest loving Heather's heart. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (7/21/2013 7:21:00 PM)

    So honest and beautiful: -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/21/2013 10:27:00 AM)

    Loving friendship....So beautiful..flow of the poem is beautiful too and message it conveyed is so true...
    Very lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,254 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/20/2013 5:20:00 PM)

    we must deal
    with what we
    have been
    Beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,130 Points Dave Walker (7/20/2013 4:38:00 PM)

    A great poem, sometimes we miss what we hope for,
    but we can make the most of what we do get. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,731 Points Valerie Dohren (7/20/2013 5:43:00 AM)

    Not all relationships can become what we wish it to be. Very good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 234 Points Lucifera Santez (7/20/2013 2:14:00 AM)

    the love denied.
    its enlightening.................... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,665 Points Valsa George (7/19/2013 11:19:00 PM)

    A very passionate utterance of love for someone who somehow didn; t have the good fortune to be wrapped in your loving embrace, but follows you like a substantial and tangible presence through out your life! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013

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