It Isn't Ink
It isn't ink I spilt in Liz's sink.
It's pink in Liz's sink. It's pink! !
If pink in Liz's sink, it ISN'T ink.
Asp
Papa was fast …
as was an asp.
Papa's last gasp:
"Asp ALWAYS fast."
Gin Sin
Win with Sin!
Sin is "In"!
I sin with gin.
Gin is "in-sin".
Steel Reels
We see Ed etches steel.
See the steel Ed etches.
Ed even etched Ernest's reels.
See etched steel reels Ernest fetches.
Buns Burn
Sunup! Up, up Sun!
Up Sun! Up, Sun, fun!
Run, Sun. Sun's run turns.
Fun-nuns' buns, fun Sun burns.
Tinsmith's Instincts
With tin snips I snip; I win.
Snip, snip! I snip thin tin...
(thin tin which is …..in tin bin.)
till tin fish spins ….wild in wind.
Tinsmith's fish spins with thin fins.
(December 1st and 2nd, 2015)
Bri, this is brilliant. Is a one vowel review possible? ? I doubt it.
wonderful...very interesting...i enjoy but it seems difficult to me to imiate...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is quite clever Bri.... Enjoyed them!