Stop
The first word on my mind
Stop
Thinking if it will be alright
I, still, digging graves tonight
Rest
All I ever want to do
Sun and moon does see it through
A bloody night needs a rest too
Sleep
Wish I could do the same thing
Crawlers underneath are now waking
For they know the world's dying
The sky keeps on hoping
Silence
Is that what's enough for me?
Cries and grief all over the field
What the great owl would say?
Humans made night as day
Darkness slowly in surrender
Work
Deserve to have with essence existing
But no one knows the world's dying
No one believes many lives were burning
Still, tonight I continue digging
Fear
Talking on every person's faith
Deceiving even its own weight
World's living on its veil
Captivating whom deserves to be chained
Struggle
Unleashing all defense mechanisms
Warriors on its edges fighting
Still, tonight I continue digging
For life's candles slowly fading
The dawn is now mourning
Freedom
I can see all those finish lines
But no one has ever thought if time
Still, I continue digging graves tonight
For I have heard the orchestra on its march
Destiny
The world was lost within
Who will win the wing?
Still, tonight I I continue digging
Pause
Ah! The word for the restless time!
Still, I continue digging graves tonight
Peace
The only term that is undefined
Mia, you have explained the torment of the mind, can't sleep, mind like cuckoo cage, going round and round, night times worst, we toss and turn but thoughts stay on. You write so very well. 10
the wording, metaphar, style, flow, sequence of thought are all good. a bejewelled poem
i love this kind of dark sadness it always brings tears to my eyes.
(Pauses) ..Peace..we are longing for..all mankind anticipated in life... well implied write..nice introspection.. Ency Bearis
Theme and structural arrangement is good. But I feel somewhere, there is an element of incomplteness, which is rare in your writings. I guess the poet was too overwhelmed by the pounding emotion and thus colliding with the expression. I give you 8. Homs
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow! a great piece! thoughtful.........things explained finely! .........10++