Min Sia


Mask


To my friend, Naru Kaede



A mask
Whatever it proclaims
Hides the very existence
But beyond the dying essence
Jailed beauty remains
Face's locked purity within
Suffocated by elemental chemicals
of the servants of the material world
Beholds the real lies
of the maternal world has endowed

Without a mask
An angel in disguise
A mysterious fairy of the old virgin valley
of the first nature's bloom.
Behind those eyes, a lady's spell
Waiting to be unleashed...
Waiting to be unveiled...
Your untouched face
The world's dying for a handful glance
To feel the realm of Naivette's gift

And here you are
Upon the fountain of spirits
Lovely face reflecting thee
My dearest friend of charm
Not be afraid of your journey
Don't revolve on the world,
Instead, let the world revolves on you
Don't play with their game
Instead, let them play with your game
My young lady of sweetest serenity...

My dearest friend Naru Kaede...

Submitted: Friday, December 12, 2008

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (12/17/2008 9:21:00 AM)

    don't we ll hide behind a mask at some point in our lives, whether it be for good or bad, shame or anger, beautifully expressed, your a great poet :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hazem Al Jaber (12/16/2008 1:57:00 AM)

    yes, , that`s so true..
    A mask
    Whatever it proclaims
    Hides the very existence

    you are a great poet knows how to pen your feelings..
    wish you all my best dear sweet poet..
    hazem al.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,117 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/13/2008 6:32:00 AM)

    But beyond the dying essence
    Jailed beauty remains
    these lines attracted me. a good write up. you have taken some efforts to make this well worded poem. today i posted some. pl read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ridge Cahill (12/12/2008 7:20:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem ofr (I presume) a wonderful friend. I truly enjoy this following lines -

    Upon the fountain of spirits
    Lovely face reflecting thee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (12/12/2008 7:07:00 PM)

    Uncover the mask in you, look within in naked flesh, ask youself ' am i worth unmasked '? Excellent piece Min, lovely piece for our dear friend Naru. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ben Gieske (12/12/2008 3:30:00 PM)

    A beautiful depiction of a young woman. I like these words and ideas of yours:

    Jailed beauty

    And here you are
    Upon the fountain of spirits.

    Mask or no mask a woman is still a mystery to be discovered and understood. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (12/12/2008 6:25:00 AM)

    Though all wear masks
    There is my one friend
    The God send
    Who is without a mask of conciet
    and deciet
    No wonder i love her most.
    Good work and Good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 65 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (12/12/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    How beautiful must be your great friend? ? ? ! ! ! ! I reallly wonder.......very good poem Min. I enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 650 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (12/12/2008 4:45:00 AM)

    Hello Min and that was a beautiful read, I enjoyed much.

    If you have an opportunity please visit my web site www.poemsnsuch.com. I also have a few videos posted on Youtube under poemsnsuch

    Thank you and keep up the good writing, Loyd (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mine Yours (12/12/2008 4:34:00 AM)

    a heartfelt and sensitive dedication to your friend
    lucky them, whoever they are (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mine Yours (12/12/2008 4:34:00 AM)

    a heartfelt and sensitive dedication to your friend
    lucky them, whoever they are (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/12/2008 4:31:00 AM)

    a good piece built out of good words adoring good fiiendship...your style here is lucid yet highly figurative, Min...i liked very much...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 253 Points Ency Bearis (12/12/2008 4:09:00 AM)

    lovely tribute and descriptive write to a friend...
    a very nice verses..that touched your friend hearts..I can see and feel in her comments...10*****

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naru Kaede (12/12/2008 3:35:00 AM)

    Oh, My Dearest Friend Min Sia,

    I'm so touch with this poem, huhuhu... I just want to cry...
    First I just want to say many thanks for you,
    This's a my first time someone give me a poem,
    Hehehe... I'm so glad with our friendship, Even we just separated from so many island...
    I just wondering what plan of GOD that bring us to this friendship,
    But whatever it is, You here to always hear my story and share laugh and pain,
    Hope this friendship will be long lasting forever, may GOD hear us...
    I just can't reply anthing, but just a thanks...

    From A Far, In Upstairs,
    Your Friend,
    Naru Kaede, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (12/12/2008 3:14:00 AM)

    beautiful..........hiding behind the mask.......something everyone does at certain times....well penned (Report) Reply

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