Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Petaled Perfection. - Poem by Fay Slimm

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Cupped in greenery,
......................... it stands tall as 'itself'.
Bud-tight, becoming unfurled
................................. with blushy show,
Bright rose, strongly fragile,
.............................. returns my melting
Sighs with quiet pride of face,
........................................ so knowingly.

Sweet silence colours it
......................... and rich tones vibrate,
The rose holds a beauty
.............from friendship's warm hand.
Dignified more by it's image,
............................................ now fated
To bloom here for me
.............................. as in faraway land.

Impassioned, compelling,
................................ incarnadine rose,
How deep your secret
...................... only providence knows.


Comments about Petaled Perfection. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie Sandra Martyres (10/25/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    Truly awesome...I too can see the perfect rose before me...10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Georgia Girl (10/21/2009 1:01:00 PM)

    Gorgeous! ! I can see the rose right in front of me, beautiful descriptions...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (10/21/2009 12:18:00 PM)

    Colours blended, from dawns first light
    hues of yellow and orange delight
    its perfume, inhaled, garnished with love
    all senses on fire, a gift from above (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Tom Balch (10/21/2009 10:46:00 AM)

    Lovely work Fay, has to be a ten,10/10 regards Tom (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (10/21/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    the beauty of your words holds me with awe 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (10/21/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    Your last verse says it all..lovely written poem! ! ! Thanks........... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 5, 2011


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