Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Pictures of Poetry.


Words can weave
Beautiful pictures of dreams.
Use them.

Thoughts are the means
Used to sculpture the words
Into beautiful pictures of dreams.
Don't abuse them.

Ideas evolve themes
That energise thoughts
Used to sculpture the words
Into beautiful pictures of dreams.
Peruse them.

Moments set scenes
Whereby ideas evolve themes
That energise thoughts
Used to sculpture the words
Into beautiful pictures of dreams.
Don't lose them.

Submitted: Thursday, September 25, 2008

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  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (11/2/2008 4:56:00 AM)

    May you always paint beautiful pictures of poetry.
    Praise for your eloquent pen.

    Always your friend,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points David Threadgold (9/25/2008 9:23:00 AM)

    Hi Fay. I believe we all paint and sculpt our words to create what we hope will be a masterpeice. I've used the same theme a number of times. we each mix our words as an artist would mix their paint, and I've often refered to the weaving of words. A truly fantastic one this linking all the arts together and with a dream to boot.10/10/10 Thanks for the read Regards Dave T. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (9/25/2008 2:35:00 AM)

    Remarkable write Fay you are a class act lady, I hope that those who write with hate on this site read this and reflect 10 Chris x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ian Bowen (9/25/2008 1:14:00 AM)

    Fay, top class piece of work. Many good lines to enjoy in this one.10/10
    Ian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adam Day (9/25/2008 12:55:00 AM)

    brilliant is the only way to express this poem. (Report) Reply

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