Sanjay Mehta

Rookie - 76 Points (14-03-1967 / Nagrota Bagwan)

Power Of Vigour - Poem by Sanjay Mehta

With forces
Of rigour
One traverses
Can't be figured
Friends and foes
On seeing him
Hither and thither

Hither and thither
Rally some
In abundance
To break the shell
Of their vigour
Envy his life of riley
For this oblivion
Into history
Where they can't be figured.

Comments about Power Of Vigour by Sanjay Mehta

  • (11/12/2012 12:38:00 PM)

    Wonderful sing-song way of conveying. :) (Report) Reply

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  • (10/15/2012 7:54:00 PM)

    A mighty downpour of good poetry capsuled in the typical Mehtian way!
    The very essence of the poem is the right blend of rhythm and apt words used in conveying an idea of immaculate observation.
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  • (10/14/2012 8:34:00 AM)

    Fantastic. Great thoughts and spiritual guide. Alas final is oblivion. But excellent poem. Thanks for reference. (Report) Reply

  • Shivani Gupta (10/13/2012 4:29:00 AM)

    I love your style of writing..its unique..Nice poem..and what you've conveyed is so true... (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/12/2012 3:47:00 AM)

    Enjoyed greatly the alliterative diction! Good work! ! (Report) Reply

  • (10/11/2012 10:00:00 PM)

    apart from the rhythmic sound, the message is very clear and understood! Where can they be figured in the history? It is a good question..Sanjay Mehta..10 (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sehgal (10/11/2012 10:22:00 AM)

    good rhyming and well presented..! (Report) Reply

  • (10/10/2012 9:21:00 AM)

    brilliant.............. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (10/10/2012 7:06:00 AM)

    Loved the resonant sound of the poem. It has enhanced the beauty of the poem. (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2012 3:10:00 AM)

    thnk you for drawing my attention to this poem. the sound has enhanced the beauty of the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Asif Andalib (10/3/2012 9:53:00 PM)

    Thought provoking and a good write. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (10/3/2012 3:25:00 PM)

    Be riley, be good
    But don't forget the
    not riley! ! ! They are aroud.......
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  • Shahzia Batool (10/3/2012 9:22:00 AM)

    Poems are composed either out of intuition or the artistry.Here what you wanted to achieve, you have successfully done it. The concentration is mostly on resonant sounds and it helps create a thematic connection too. A good conscious effort..thanks for the invitation to read it... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 2, 2012

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