Power Of Vigour Poem by Sanjay Mehta

Power Of Vigour

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Vigour
If
Triggered
With forces
Of rigour
Path
One traverses
Can't be figured
Friends and foes
Quiver
On seeing him
Achieve
Hither and thither

Hither and thither
Rally some
Others
In abundance
Dither
To break the shell
Of their vigour
Envy his life of riley
Silently
For this oblivion
Into history
Where they can't be figured.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 03 October 2012

Poems are composed either out of intuition or the artistry.Here what you wanted to achieve, you have successfully done it. The concentration is mostly on resonant sounds and it helps create a thematic connection too. A good conscious effort..thanks for the invitation to read it...

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Poetheart Morgan 03 October 2012

Be riley, be good But don't forget the not riley! ! ! They are aroud.......

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Asif Andalib 03 October 2012

Thought provoking and a good write. Thanks for sharing

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Indira Babbellapati 05 October 2012

thnk you for drawing my attention to this poem. the sound has enhanced the beauty of the poem.

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Neela Nath Das 10 October 2012

Loved the resonant sound of the poem. It has enhanced the beauty of the poem.

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Rupika Alekhya 12 November 2012

Wonderful sing-song way of conveying. :)

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A mighty downpour of good poetry capsuled in the typical Mehtian way! The very essence of the poem is the right blend of rhythm and apt words used in conveying an idea of immaculate observation.

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Fantastic. Great thoughts and spiritual guide. Alas final is oblivion. But excellent poem. Thanks for reference.

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Shivani Gupta 13 October 2012

I love your style of writing..its unique..Nice poem..and what you've conveyed is so true...

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Valsa George 12 October 2012

Enjoyed greatly the alliterative diction! Good work! !

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