Atomized ocean, sun powered, airlifted,
With thunder and lightning, breaks
Eternal silence of infinite space.
Unknown what is it holding when it falls, yet
Blessed from above despite unclear sky,
As if immensity taps at our life
Either as celestial shower of mercy
Or world wide waterfalls of existence
Emptying itself on what the world survives-
Failed or excess, all is derailed.
What's by birth creation whole, unique taste,
Free its service, humanity its faith,
Ever bent to put on level with heaven
Man's earth turned desire.
waterfalls of existance took my fancy.Try 'Storm' if time permits. regards O great one.
Monsoons....... I love it, your just getting better with ever line and verse.
Immensely beautiful lines on rain.A glamorous version of rain.A big 10+++++++.Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant poetry with all of us.
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I would like to translate this poem
i adore this poem i love the rain its beautiful great! ! ! ! amazingly awesome