yoonoos peerbocus (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

wow...such an unusual topic to write a poem on

The watermelon is filled with nutrients.
Vitamins, let me mention those heaven sent;
There are the b vitamins, and of course vitamin c
But the most important if consumed in excess is vitamin p.

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summer's blood. i can drink this blood. its delicious.

We must find inner peace from inner sweetness. That's the trick, the fixed solace factor, even when life's variables drab undyingly. That's the trick. Great majestic poem

Off the truck expression! Very nice.

Everything good and bad bears seeds.
Enlightening poem.

water melon has one thing to offer
its sweetness,

every slice shall lead a taste bud to the truth of taste. Seasons, centuries or civilization will change but the we are looking for the same taste. But sometimes in searching for the aim, we forgot how to be not selfish.
i like this poem and it is good.

So profound when reading '......bear peace= a sweet heart, summer blood....'

Descriptive and meaningful! Good poem indeed, ; D